ERIC Number: EJ1341926
Record Type: Journal
Publication Date: 2021
Pages: 9
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ISSN: EISSN-1931-4744
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Phrasing Feedback to Improve Students' Writing in a Large First-Year Humanities Course
Cowan, Mairi; Evans-Tokaryk, Tyler; Farooqi, Abdullah; Graham, Allison; Kaler, Michael
International Journal for the Scholarship of Teaching and Learning, v15 n2 Article 15 2021
On a revise-and-resubmit assignment in a large introductory History course, students were provided with feedback that was phrased either as questions, statements, or imperatives. This study examines which form was most likely to lead to improvement in the students' writing. Generalized estimating equations (GEE) were used to analyze a data set comprising 669 individual pieces of feedback on 67 sets of papers. Researchers found that, overall, students were most likely to implement feedback phrased as imperatives and least likely to implement feedback phrased as questions, and that the likelihood shifted somewhat depending on which aspect of writing was being commented upon; the extent of change required; the students' past performance in the course; and the person providing the feedback.
Descriptors: Feedback (Response), Writing Improvement, College Freshmen, History, Introductory Courses, Foreign Countries, Writing Skills, Revision (Written Composition)
Centers for Teaching & Technology at Georgia Southern University. IJ-SoTL, Georgia Southern University, Henderson Library 1301, Statesboro, GA 30460. e-mail: sotlij@georgiasouthern.edu; Web site: http://digitalcommons.georgiasouthern.edu/ij-sotl/
Publication Type: Journal Articles; Reports - Research
Education Level: Higher Education; Postsecondary Education
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Language: English
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Identifiers - Location: Canada (Toronto)
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