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Publication Date: 2010
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The Use of Models as a Form of Written Feedback to Secondary School Pupils of English
Esteban, Noelia Martinez; Roca de Larios, Julio
International Journal of English Studies, v10 n2 p143-170 2010
The present study investigated how noticing is related to composing and subsequent feedback processing in individual and collaborative EFL writing. Participants were Spanish secondary school pupils at a low-intermediate proficiency level who completed a three-stage writing task that included writing a picture-based story (Stage 1), comparing their written texts with two native-speaker models (Stage 2), and attempting subsequent revisions (Stage 3). The results indicate that the students noticed mainly lexical problems at the writing stage but could only find a few solutions to those problems in the models provided. However, the comparison with the models allowed them, especially those who wrote collaboratively, to notice a large number of features related to the content of the pictures and the linguistic means used to express that content. They were also found to incorporate a reasonable number in subsequent revisions. A number of implications from these findings for research and pedagogy are suggested. (Contains 7 tables and 5 notes.)
Descriptors: Feedback (Response), English (Second Language), Secondary School Curriculum, Spanish Speaking, Lexicology, Student Writing Models, Second Language Instruction, Second Language Learning, Collaborative Writing, Attention, Revision (Written Composition), Educational Practices
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